Bitmob Writers' Suggestion Box: Incorporate The Jump

If you've spent more than ten seconds on any of the modern gaming blogs - Joystiq, Kotaku, Destructoid, and yes, even Bitmob - you're familiar with the phrase "hit the jump."

In order to show more content per page, these blogs only show a snippet of each post on the main page, while the rest of it is hidden behind another link - the "jump" itself. Sometimes it's there to prevent visitors to the main page from loading all the pictures and videos embedded in the article, and sometimes it's there to keep long articles from breaking up the main page's flow.

Why on earth am I bringing this up, you ask? Hit the jump to find out!

Here's the thing - writers on those blogs plan for the jump. They know it's going to be there, so they write their articles with it in mind, the first few paragraphs specifically written as a tease to get their readers to follow along past the jump.

My point here is that if the pros do it, why shouldn't we?

Because I've gotta tell you guys, when we don't do it, it's not pretty. I haven't quite been able to figure out how the MyBlog application determines where the jump is when one hasn't been deliberately placed - but when scrolling down the Mobfeed, it's a mischmasch of one-sentence/one-paragraph/one-picture openings, sprinkled here and there with the occasional entire article.

I can only speak for myself here, but a title and one sentence/paragraph/picture isn't usually enough to pique my interest. Since I don't have a lot of time to surf these days, that means fewer hits for your articles. And, if your entire article somehow makes it into the Mobfeed, not only does it mean that readers have to scroll past the whole thing to get to the next article, it also means that they can read the whole thing without generating any hits at all!

It's an absolute mess, but we have the power to fix it, and here's how. On the far right side of the MyBlog toolbar is a button called "Add Readmore." Put your cursor at the end of the line just before where you want the jump to be, click the button, and voila - a dashed red line appears, and you've got yourself a jump!

Also, start writing your articles with the jump in mind. A few paragraphs is best - just enough to give your reader a good sense of the article's premise, as well as give your article the space it deserves on the Mobfeed - but not so much that it takes a disproportionate share of the real estate.

If you're including a picture at the beginning of your article, either make it small enough to wrap your opening paragraphs around it or, if you want to keep it big, put it after the jump.

If everyone in the Bitmob community starts incorporating the jump, it'll make the Mobfeed look that much more professional - and the better the Mobfeed looks, the better we all look.

Happy writing!

Comments (16)

Yes it is a feature, but I have found out after my first paragraph it automatically places it there for me. Then I tried to use it this weekend and it cut out the rest of my articles. So in a sense there is all ready a preset Jump button in my mind that I use. Then again my writing is not as good as anyone else's here.
Toby Davis , August 17, 2009
Mine is fixed thanks for reminding me.
Toby Davis , August 17, 2009
I'm not going to lie. It took me like two weeks to figure out what "hit the jump" meant. I've never heard of that term before coming to Bitmob.
David Matos , August 17, 2009
The way I found out about this was through trial and error. After I had posted a few blogs where the whole thing showed up in the feed, and a few where only a sentence made it to the feed, common sense kicked in and told me what I was doing wrong.
Good advice for the n00b bitmobers and veterans (I don't think any of us can call our selves veterans yet) alike.
Jazz English , August 17, 2009
Thanks for doing this Brian. Next time I write something I will take the jump into mind and write accordingly.
Lance Darnell , August 17, 2009
I'd hit that...
Jon Porter , August 18, 2009
Brian, you should also remind people to rate the comments! I rarely see people do this, and its like ignoring a good function of the site!
Lance Darnell , August 18, 2009
Okay. Speaking as a 29 year old video game enthusiast who also happens to be completely computer illiterate, I have some questions.
Thomas Ingallinera , August 19, 2009
@ Lance, it goes deeper than that. How do I make something a link? I haven't gotten to the green/purple problem yet....
Thomas Ingallinera , August 19, 2009
OH!!! Highlight the word you want to link the url to. Then, as it is highlighted hit the button that looks like a sideways 8, then proceed as I said in the email....enable java, and paste the url....
Lance Darnell , August 19, 2009
Okay, I'm gonna try. There ain't no "blogs for beginners" hand book is there?
Thomas Ingallinera , August 19, 2009
@Tommy - I am still learning too, just make a blog post entitled testing, and that way you can mess around without anyone seeing your work ahead of time!
Lance Darnell , August 19, 2009
I'm trying to add a picture from my computer. it doesn't wanna work. help?
Thomas Ingallinera , August 19, 2009
Oh, for that, um..... perhaps just open the photo, open the your blog, and try sliding the pic onto your blog, then highlight it, and adjust picture settings.

If that does not work, post it to tumbler or myspace or something...
Lance Darnell , August 19, 2009
Doesn't wanna work. Frustrated. My baby has a Face book page, I'll try this again tomorrow. quick question: when I was f-ing around with it, did it pop up where you could see it?
Thomas Ingallinera , August 19, 2009
Um...no but i was not looking the whole time, I am in music mode....
Lance Darnell , August 19, 2009

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