The drawings on the third/fourth page are too vague. Couldn't see what was going on. Rest is ok.

Thanks for the criticism. By third/fourth page did you mean the pages 3/4 out of the 10 panels altogether or pages 3/4 of the 4 pages I divided it into on Bitmob?

@Chris The drawings are good. 

This is my favorite writing prompt by far. Great work, Chris!

Thanks for the prompt praise, Mike. To be honest I was halfway through drawing the comic when I saw your video on Mafia 2, and I became afraid that I unintentionally drew the guy to look like you and that you would take it the wrong way. It was too late to change it though.